San Diego Poetry Guild

notes on guild, poetry, and San Diego

3.04.2005

San Diego Slam and the Christian Right

About fifty people meet to judge poetry. The stated rules are pretty clear: three minute time limit, no props, no costumes, just the poet and his/her voice; maximum score 10, minimum score 0, points deducted for every 15 seconds over time; poets judged on "content" and "performance" (5 points each); five judges instructed to be consistent in scoring but also responsive to audience feedback; audience encouraged to "let 'em know it" if any score seems too low/high; first round yields 4-5 top scorers; top score in second round wins the pot.

The unstated rules--and conventions--are less obvious but here's my take: Collaboration or team-slamming (here in SD at least) is inherently discouraged, or at least never invited; the book, the writing journal, the reading surface, the mic, the stage, etc., are all unacknowledged props; participants are costumed to the hilt in pants, T-shirts, jackets, vests, caps, and jewelry, and these constumes mark the poets in particular ways that the audience responds to; poets are on stage, under lights, standing, facing the audience; the audience is on the floor, in the dark, seated, facing the poet; poems are verbal/vocal things, usually rhymed and metered; poets are "guys" (of the last 21 perfomers, spanning two weeks, 4 were women, and none made it to the second round); "performance," despite the stated rules, is the main criterion; collective audience response (applause, etc.) is a good indicator of the score average then tabulated, with occasional discrepancies between audience and judge perception regulated/corrected via audience "feedback"; "content" and "performance" are categories that go unexplained beyond recommended gestalts like "excellent" or "really sucked"; ambiguity aside, one kind of poetry that wins audience favor in both the content and performance (loosely conceived) areas is poetry that preaches salvation through Jesus Christ and the Christian gospel.

The structures and tropes of ritual "witness" are everywhere in slam and other formal spoken word events. "Witness" in the sense that Rothenberg has it, albeit in a hugely different context: "the sounding of the written ‘law’" where the poet, through oral performance, "is witness to the way it goes," witness "to a (prior) vision," to the original sounding (making) of the poem and also to its re-creation, now, in the moment of oral delivery. However, the social "law" of slam poetry (and spoken word in general if we can go that far) is a rather vague set of visible and invisible conventions only partly covered in my lists above. Slam law is also a general law of self-aggrandizement masquerading as "witness" in the sense of witness to re/creation.

At the two most recent San Diego Slam events, the same "guy" won both nights, and with poems (performance and content) that I'd characterize as post-enlightenment protestant evangelical -- i.e., a certain monotonal vocal intensity supporting a message of personal salvation and empowerment through the teachings of Jesus Christ, who authors (according to both the winner's and the runner-up's testimonials) the poet's word and sponsors its delivery before the audience/congregation.

"Walk with me," the winning poet would say at the end of each poem.

And the audience ate it up: two or three perfect "10"s.

Slamming (in San Diego) is a winner-takes-all, Survivor-style arrangement where competitors offer up a $5 entry fee that goes toward the winning pot. The winner wins the pot (along with a small "trophy") minus a small percentage for the house. The winner is the one with the most points by the end of the night. Losers are systematically removed (from the stage if not the island) if point totals don't add up. The goal of slam is to win -- and to win (over) the hearts and minds of the audience, whose proxy judges issue verdicts within seconds of witnessing the (witnessing of) the poet's performance. In winning, the winning poet witnesses the winning, as well.

"These are his words," the winning poet said, holding the trophy aloft.

On the Right these days we see a marriage of molecular individualism and righteous Christian entitlement that resolves most often to grand indictments of any one or any group unwilling to "walk" with the cult of "me." The style is obtuse and powerful, a slick costume of imminent freedom (the self saved in rapture) and eminent domain (the truth is out there and we know where and how to find it). The troops advance from the City of God to sing a song of hope and redemption through perseverance, self-reliance, and the pursuit of personal property. Not we, but I shall overcome, and overwhelm, and win (over). Dear World, they seem to say, Walk with Me.

Slam is not all that, to be sure, and what I got a glimpse of the other night--taking into consideration both content and performance--was a lot more than that, too.

Best to go judge for yourself:

Every 2nd & 4th Monday at
Voz Alta (www.vozalta.org)
1544 Broadway
San Diego, California
Call (619) 230-1869

Sign up to compete at 8:00.
Witness at 8:30.

7 Comments:

At 10:33 AM, Blogger CarlosConrad said:

BINGO...

poetry as battle,contest,
warrior mentality,
content poor,
attitude rich...

cult of personality.

stand up poetry.

" Just win,baby."

Al Davis, owner
Oakland/LA/Oakland Raiders

 
At 5:48 PM, Blogger GJ Schultz said:

It is time
time time time
It is time to stand
against the christians
these lions
whose triumphant disregard for truth
devours the innocent, the poor,
the children who have no time
whose time is stolen
by these ravenous beasts of blind belief
who prowl for unsaved lambs
to gorge their bellies
upon the commonwealth of earth.

For Jesus's sake
stand against the christians
who drag his name through the filth
of their own righteousness,
who offer the thirsty
the swill of their own holiness,
the poison libation of their sinless lives.

You blaspheme with your praise
and murder with a morality
whose passionate defense of the Commandments
is a hypocritical smirk of their denial.
You hug each other in spiritual glee
at the thought of a guilty sinner on the tree.
guilty of humanity, trussed and prepared
for eternal roasting.

You are damned, condemned
O' my proud holy christians
for there is not a sinner to be found among you:
your upright circle of holiness
ringed by the pious rage of vengeful fire
once again leaves Jesus quite alone
with none for company
but those you hate.

 
At 5:50 PM, Blogger bill said:

I really appreciate Cecil Hayduke's, and everyone else's, response to the "Slam" post -- especially since I get so very few responses and it's nice to know that this blog gets read from time to time!

On the finer details of Cecil's response, he's absolutely right to call into question certain impressions I might have made that San Diego Slam -- or any and all slam phenomena -- is reducible to the broad set of conventions I listed. Still, I did add pretty clearly that I was describing two related events and also that slam poetry (what I attended that month and generally) is "much more" than a platform for evangelical witness. To be honest, I chose that title precisely because it was an overtly contentious thing to say -- a kind of slam of slam -- but also to draw some dialog (which is good to have, I think) about the prevailing conventions of slam poetry -- and that I think was the meat of the matter. Still, for any downright falsities, or for any hurt feelings, I apologize. I certainly DON'T think anyone needs to be "worried" about slam poetry. (And by the way, Cecil does a GREAT job hosting the events.)

That being said, however, I would also add that some of the broader points about the nature of "witness" at slam events, as well as some of the conventions I listed, hold true despite Cecil's objections. I've seen plenty of slam events, in this city and others and over about a decade, and while it may not be fair to pick on "March" in downtown San Diego, I still think slam poetry can be restrictive in many ways and these restrictions (often lost behind notions of openness and democratic participation) should be acknowledged and, why not, talked about, especially where slam or spoken word in general is essentialized as somehow purer, more immediate, or 'closer to the people' than other kinds of poetry and performance. Whether or not the theme is often, seldom, or almost never Christian, the way the things tend to go down is, I think, very close to church-like community witness.

Beyond that, the only thing that troubles me is that debates of this sort often get dragged down into an us/them war, with slam defendents placed on one side and academics and "slam critics" on the other, and I don't think that's necessary, let alone healthy. Slam and spoken word are getting A LOT of favorable attention in the academic world these days (I know a spoken word poet and grad student in SD who's writing her dissertation on it!), and I think that's the kind of criticism (historical, cultural) that slam enthusiasts should welcome eagerly if they're serious about challenging other conventions and doing something truly different. Otherwise, slam becomes just another exclusionary device that thinks it's democratic but is really just set in its ways -- an illusion shared by a lot of poetry institutions over the decades that thought they were "reaching" better than any before.

Cecil implies that poetry performance is either "reaching an audience" OR "mumbling" from a journal or MFA poetry. Besides playing into my initial point (that there are given, if unstated, conventions for particular kinds of "reaching"), this also begs the question: isn't there something in between?

One of the things the Guild is trying to do is explore that in-between space. We're also hoping to rig something down at Voz Alta in early June, so please come see (and challenge, if you want) everything we do.

Anyway, I posted the blog to try out some ideas about similarities of strategy that I still think cut across slam gatherings and certain evangelical elements. Please note: I don't think there's anything inherently wrong with a culture of witness. I do think there are good reasons for talking about it in relation to poetry, which has always been close to sacred traditions and religious practices.

 
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